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not a good moment

by Peter Humphreys

evening
light
shafts
windows
bare
patterns
chair
backs
flair
ice
crystals
flower
breath
vapours
passion
spent
sheets
rent
money
lent
blood
black
despair

10/16/2006

Posted on 10/16/2006
Copyright © 2024 Peter Humphreys

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 10/17/06 at 07:24 PM

Peter, these words, stacked upon one another as they are...seem to be bearing a dark weight. To me, very effective in word, form and title. Thanks.

Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 10/18/06 at 02:12 PM

they seem to link together like a word game, but still make sense... great write

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