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october fourth

by Ava Blu



madonna must have lurked too long in your head;

you won't convince them you're a virgin.



10/04/2006

Posted on 10/05/2006
Copyright © 2024 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Melanie J Yarbrough on 10/06/06 at 02:19 AM

ha. I like the separation of the two- the first line and then the second one cuts with meaning. :) oh and btw-- I love damien rice- but his lyrics just don't do him justice, his voice makes those songs.

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 10/08/06 at 03:16 AM

Nice burn.

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