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failure to correspond to the majority

by Jared Fladeland

i can't
be
case-sensitive.


I'm exponential
in a vertical way.


art is drifting like floating
rocks.

punch me two times in the mouth
and lick my wounds with salt.

10/04/2006

Posted on 10/04/2006
Copyright © 2024 Jared Fladeland

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 10/05/06 at 05:35 AM

an explosive tequila shot, dude, this is just fiery and fun! you are OUT THERE, and a couple punches to the mouth won't change that, you'll still be floatin'! you rock! PK

Posted by Ava Blu on 10/25/06 at 02:26 AM

your title alone is a poem. 
this is hitme-and-takeall-mymoney kind of good.

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