breaking up is one word from breaking down by Vere Mantratriadthoughts of you seem parasitic
and I wonder what impulses
could possibly endear such a
debilitating disease to me
as much as it has to keep
this heart in tune with every
falter on a scale of one to
ten thousand puddles that you
were so very careful to skip
over to the other side where
I never found myself able to
wander though I may try with
all my might be it me or you
in some other sky on some
other chart that is yet to
be found whether it be
within or beyond my grasp
I'm still looking for some
cure or at least a home
remedy to rid me permanently
of all traces of you and
your kind. 10/01/2006 Posted on 10/02/2006 Copyright © 2025 Vere Mantratriad
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 10/03/06 at 09:41 PM "be found whether it be
within or beyond my grasp
I'm still looking for some
cure " You had me at break down and with the first few lines I knew this feeling oh so well for I have suffered from such a disease...when you find a cure let me know but until then please keep enlightening the suffering with poetic remedies. smh:) |
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