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6 Seconds Of Calculated Rage

by Razel Davies

Did it hurt?
That snap,
Of your neck.
Arms broken,
Defence down.

Mook Jong trained,
Palms of death.
Slam Set tools,
Rip you down,
Shatter your bones.

Your balance off,
Weak points wide.
Patella smashed,
Your scream loud.

Six seconds,
Controlled insanity.
Heart beat,
Mortality's call.

Strike me,
Your big mistake.
Back off now,
Or your life,
I'll take.

10/01/2006

Posted on 10/01/2006
Copyright © 2024 Razel Davies

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Joan Serratelli on 10/04/06 at 08:58 PM

WOW! Intense, powerful and full of rage! Wonderful description- great imagery!

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