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undone

by Bethany Lee

nothing relevant,
lacking propensity...
forward momentum rewind.
unexpected events
unretained in memoirs.
no words to explain
unattained enlightenment.
hard to see through sullen shadows.
evading deepthought for fear of drowning.
mondaythrufriday
morning sip of coffee
run run run
no physicality involved.
the world revolving
and here i stand
still as
snailmail evolution.
unable, as of late,
to obtain placidity.

09/28/2006

Posted on 09/29/2006
Copyright © 2025 Bethany Lee

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Sarah Graves on 12/18/06 at 11:46 PM

I really liked this piece, you convey to the reader a sense of neutral bitterness stopped in time. I liked the "snailmail evolution" very clever. Great read!

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