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to edit is to delete...or a poem without words

by Charlie Morgan

crank-up the equipment that causes a wrinkled brow
of wonder-if-that-fits line you just penned;
keep it idling, for fodder is everything
and everything is fodder.

toss words in the trash for being overused:
gossamer; cicada; cloud; baby; breath;
heart; dreams; touch; caress;
love; infatuation; lust; death; feel;
honey; heartache; heartbreak;
skin-licking, and world.

now, my challenge is to write a poem without words.
it follows:

09/19/2006

Posted on 09/19/2006
Copyright © 2025 Charlie Morgan

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 09/19/06 at 03:53 PM

Lol u just deleted my favourite words!!! another great write Chaz

Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 09/19/06 at 05:30 PM

Poem without words? Life I rewrite it everyday....as U do 2 wonderful I love this, even if you did throw my favorite words in the trash :(

Posted by A. Paige White on 09/19/06 at 05:55 PM

Loved this, Chaz. You put cicada in there... awwwwww... and I LOVE that word... hehehe... ;-}

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