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her violet completion

by Shonda Creemer




she dreams in shades
of blue
those indigo trances
leave her empty
lost within

yet she remains faithful
to her silent words
sapphires glistening
like deep water stars
under the moonlight's kiss

ready to be uttered

her eyes protray a loneliness
born from a melancholy wisdom

she finds no comfort
in her desolate forest
an atmoshpere of lapis

despair

and she waits

for him
her reds-oranges-yellows
her love
her warmth

her violet completion



09/06/2006

Author's Note: pic taken from Maria Howard's journal and piece inspired by it :)

Posted on 09/07/2006
Copyright © 2024 Shonda Creemer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 09/07/06 at 08:07 AM

AMAZING....You hit the nail right on the head. You pulled the feeling right out of the picture. Thank you Shonda. + faves.

Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 09/11/06 at 07:01 AM

lovely use of hues and feeling in this...

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