Jimmy's
coming home
they say
upon the
post boat
any day
his letters
full
of wonderous news
of
buildings huge
and
jobs to spare
but
in the lean
mean
mountain air
I wonder
I
just
wonder
Peter, the uncertain tone in your lines add just the right touch of mystery. Hope and despair are blended here. I also sense a reluctance to leave the known for the unknown.
~Chelle~