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I

by Maria Terezia Ferencz

I(t) keeps me strong
Knowing
I belong
life has all been lived before
these mistakes
that my I creates
have all been made before
knowing I belong
to We
Therefore
knowing keeps me strong
My I not frightened anymore
right or wrong
My I to we, thus all belong
Our I has all been done before

08/30/2006

Author's Note: This is why "I" visit graveyards to remind "me" that it has indeed all been done before. There are no fresh footprints in my mind, someone somewhere went through this path before and survived so "I" can too.

Posted on 08/30/2006
Copyright © 2026 Maria Terezia Ferencz

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 08/30/06 at 07:48 PM

Hi Maria. This is a rather fascinating poem. I like it. I always try to remember that without a monster or two it's not a quest, merely a gaggle of friends wandering about. Nice write. Thanks.

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 08/30/06 at 08:37 PM

I read this after I read "BE". I agree, this piece is fascinating- very thought provoking and a stark contrast to "BE". Excellent write, but graveyards still make me sad.

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