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you wanted a gardner, so I wasted my dreams

by Ava Blu

quarter lilies
pushing up the window sill

I am falling over and under and and and

[I am falling underneath this]

my fingernails green
from digging up your flowers

I resort to sleeping in the dirt

lay your stone near my head
as I cry to the soil

I would live to witness
the rain falling from your hair
but I can't keep away from the garden

line the fence around
keep me tangled in the roots

your quarter lilies
are dying.

08/07/2006

Author's Note: a randomness I barely understand...

Posted on 08/07/2006
Copyright © 2025 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jayme L Helmick on 08/12/06 at 02:07 PM

Absolutely beautiful, Jeanna! This twisted and turned my brain and I enjoyed it thoroughly. Good write!

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 04/22/09 at 03:58 PM

I dunno...this seemed like it had a pretty tight, sharp focus to me. I really like the title you came up with for this one, and there's some really powerful images that help make that title so perfect (especially lines 7-9).

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