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just under 5 feet, you loomed over my life
by Vere Mantratriadif there'd been more time
there'd be no space
for memory to expand
and take hold
you'd be but a snapshot
in a thousand page album 08/02/2006 Posted on 08/03/2006
Copyright © 2024 Vere Mantratriad
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Lauren Singer on 08/06/06 at 04:51 AM whooosh! ..falls backwards into all the words i just stumbled over trying to leave you a comment that would do justice to how amazing this poem is..
...yeah, wow. |
| Posted by Meghan Helmich on 07/09/08 at 04:48 PM it's those darn short poems that really knock me for a loop. just like this one. and this is when the title really really really makes it. very good! |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/16/09 at 01:20 PM The title does really say it all. You have the unique ability to say alot in very few words. Really good write! |
| Posted by Richard Vince on 08/31/21 at 09:38 PM yes. i know this feeling well. you've expressed it way more concisely than i ever could though. this poem is the perfect example of how to say a lot without using many words. superb. |
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