"Sleep Song" by Max PhineasWaking life
is naught but
Space between d r e a m s 08/01/2006
Author's Note: Thank you to Michael for the perfect finishing idea.
Posted on 08/02/2006 Copyright © 2024 Max Phineas
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 08/02/06 at 04:45 AM I am not sure about the form, but who cares I love the thought of it. How true this is...great write! |
Posted by Delilah Coyne on 08/02/06 at 02:38 PM A simple idea stated beautifully. Well done. |
Posted by Michelle Angelini on 08/05/06 at 03:10 AM How true. Cole, this is such a sweet profound thought. Simply wonderful.
~Chelle~ |
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