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"Sleep Song"

by Max Phineas

Waking life
is naught but
Space between d r e a m s

08/01/2006

Author's Note: Thank you to Michael for the perfect finishing idea.

Posted on 08/02/2006
Copyright © 2024 Max Phineas

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 08/02/06 at 04:45 AM

I am not sure about the form, but who cares I love the thought of it. How true this is...great write!

Posted by Delilah Coyne on 08/02/06 at 02:38 PM

A simple idea stated beautifully. Well done.

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 08/05/06 at 03:10 AM

How true. Cole, this is such a sweet profound thought. Simply wonderful.
~Chelle~

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