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When We're Apart

by Maria Terezia Ferencz


twilight ache

violent intensity

soulwaves

of you

washing over me

licking at my heart

unknown before

your propensity

to awake delight

divine

destiny

creates a void

soulsweetly

I ache

I need

to be

full of you

when

we're

apart

07/27/2006

Author's Note: Are you listening?

Posted on 07/28/2006
Copyright © 2026 Maria Terezia Ferencz

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Maureen Glaude on 07/28/06 at 11:41 AM

original treatment of separation, vividly displayed in style, form, and content. I really enjoyed this. Concise and moving.

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