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Haiku - Snowdrift

by Julie Adams

Geisha on a bridge
A snowdrift, winter’s gifts fall
Stars in her black hair


Posted on 07/24/2006
Copyright © 2021 Julie Adams

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 07/27/06 at 11:50 PM

a beautifully condensed version of memoirs of a geisha. so much can be said with a simple gesture. the same is true with your poem. shiny! PK

Posted by Joe David on 09/18/09 at 03:23 AM

Wow. I can see it. Stars in her black hair indeed. I like it very much.

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