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Wake Me Slow

by Dave Fitzgerald

Milky white
sunlight
touches me
so light,
it gently
warms me
up to
morning pace.

Then... my alarm clock RINGS
and RUINS ev'rything
and CRUELY SLAPS me 'bout my creased up FACE!

06/26/2006

Posted on 06/26/2006
Copyright © 2026 Dave Fitzgerald

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Cole Miller on 07/07/06 at 06:00 AM

man do i hate that alarm clock. the contrast in this piece is very bright.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 06/15/07 at 01:03 AM

Humorous it is! But not funny when waking! Glad I no longer have to set an alarm clock except on rare occasions! Interesting format!

Posted by Sam Roberts on 01/29/13 at 07:49 PM

haha, great. I feel like this most days :)

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