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every sense
by Emily Davidsoni want to touch you
down to
every
milimeter
every inch
down to your
fingernails
your navel
your toes
the beautiful hair that
rests softly
on your shoulders
i want to
explore you
down to
every sense
i want to smell
the perfume on your wrists
.
i want to hear
the sound of your heart thumping
.
i want to touch
your supple skin
.
i want to taste
your tender tongue
and i want to see
that you want this
just like i do
down to
every sense 06/25/2006 Posted on 06/26/2006
Copyright © 2024 Emily Davidson
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Steven Kenworthy on 06/26/06 at 04:11 AM mmm. i feel like i need to breathe deep. strong, simple...powerfully forward write. i know this feeling very much...it's beautiful. fine write emily. i think i might have to check out some of your other stuff. intense...! |
| Posted by Jean Mollett on 06/29/06 at 03:36 AM Hi Emily,
Sounds like there a very strong love story here. Loving and caring. Good one, some might kinda sexy too. Does the person know? :) |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 06/30/06 at 07:08 PM Nice long line (shape of poem) of short lines...like a mirror of the meaning.... |
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