by Peter Humphreys
down its light
Author's Note: For those who know Edinburgh (Scotland), and those who yet do not, this is a short romantic air.
Posted on 06/23/2006
Copyright © 2024 Peter Humphreys
|Member Comments on this Poem
|Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 06/23/06 at 08:30 PM
mmmmmm. sweet. i like the short lines. simple. romantic. bristling, too! PK
|Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 06/24/06 at 08:34 AM
Spot on. Simple, effective and vivid.
|Posted by Anne Engelen on 06/24/06 at 08:44 AM
very inviting! Makes one wanna go Edinburgh :)
|Posted by Christel Crews on 06/25/06 at 02:23 AM
this is incredible! the flow makes it feel almost like a children's rhyme but the imagery takes you deep :)