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not so strong at all

by Vere Mantratriad

I ask you what
I have done
I beg and plead
for your reply
but get none
your bear trap
beginning to
clamp down
on my shoes
release me
from your
watchful eye
I don't know
how I will
get by
you're stepping
on my spine
and it's
beginning to
crack crack crack

07/19/2005

Author's Note: repost 07/19/05

Posted on 06/14/2006
Copyright © 2025 Vere Mantratriad

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Christel Crews on 06/19/06 at 03:05 AM

suffocating to the point of breaking.. a powerful piece- the short lines amplify the strong emotion

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