"Sleeping Beauty Has Nothing on You" by Max PhineasYoure beautiful when you weep
Gorgeous when you smile
I watch you as you sleep.
Wondering how I got here
How I got to be so lucky
I gaze into the mirror.
Your reflection, bathed in sunlight-
I am captivated by your glow
Youll forever be in my sight.
Sweet woman who rests beside me,
Preserve your innocence in your dreams-
And I will love you eternally.
06/09/2006 Posted on 06/09/2006 Copyright © 2024 Max Phineas
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Vere Mantratriad on 06/10/06 at 12:34 AM This is so sweet and subtle. Just right. |
Posted by Delilah Coyne on 06/10/06 at 12:22 PM The title is wonderful! It's perfect. |
Posted by Rebecca Lin on 06/12/06 at 12:56 AM That's so beautiful! |
Posted by Tom Goss on 06/12/06 at 01:01 PM The kind of tender music only the instrument of love can play. |
Posted by Melinda Sordino on 01/04/07 at 10:10 PM what a lovely little piece of art. i wish i could have seen how your sleeping beauty reacted upon its presenation! |
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