| Posted by Julie Adams on 06/08/06 at 06:06 PM THIS IS AMAZING...I was a swimmer once too, and never have I seens such an effective style, line breaks, strong imagery and ideas, perfectly poised one stanza to the next...creative and beautiful, peace, *jewels* ps: loved the stroke, kick and breathe repeating at the beginning and end of each stanza, very effective...it captures each stanza in motion... |
