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I'm an absolute peach

by Bradd Howard

you said I tasted like peaches
and now you wanted to plant an orchard.
a foundation from which our love would grow.

My response: "Yeah but sometimes love's the pits
and all your trees could die in a blight."

"but what is love with out risk?
Kiss me again.

(sighing)

I just might...

I just might.

06/05/2006

Author's Note: playing with some new styles

Posted on 06/05/2006
Copyright © 2024 Bradd Howard

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Paul Marino on 06/05/06 at 09:33 PM

i don't kno if the third line is necessary, but i like the other four first lines.

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