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a lost love like no other

by Vere Mantratriad

a lost love,
like no other
but an enema:
muddy and foul
until it runs clear
and hollowed
ready to start anew

05/25/2006

Author's Note: title from Lori Blair

Posted on 05/26/2006
Copyright © 2024 Vere Mantratriad

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Christel Crews on 05/26/06 at 04:02 AM

i just love short poems :) they are so jam packed with emotion and feeling... this one is excellent and i hope you can start anew.. there is a process that must occur for us to stand back up, a stripping of the old before we are able to take on anything new..

Posted by Junemarie Roldan on 07/03/06 at 05:03 AM

Sometimes you have to pan through a lot of $#%@, to find the nuggets. Here's to a great nugget in your future. I've been reading through your work one after the other, and my head feels like it is going to explode. It's a virtual smorgesbord, fit for the palete of any one but the dead.

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