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Compromising Moves
by Amanda L MarronKneeling, he tasted her blood
Salivating
As he glimpsed at her naked breast
And pinched her nipple hard
Unbuttoned trousers
Smiling, deviously
For her long blonde hair
Bend my longing backwards, baby
Scary how you ignite me
He found that special wet place between her legs
This is where I stick my finger he thought
Bulging under the thin cotton cloth 05/20/2006 Posted on 05/21/2006
Copyright © 2024 Amanda L Marron
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 05/24/06 at 02:39 AM Yes, mind and body. I am not sure of the soul. |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 05/25/06 at 02:01 AM Yes, an expression of lust, as Ashok said, "mind and body"...but there is something hard about this piece, something rough, unsoft, unsensual even. Maybe it's the expression of the savage force of the urge, unyeilding and UNcompromising, almost cruel lust. Yes, if there is soul in this episode it is not revealed in the aura of this piece. It's a raw scene of "compromising moves" expressing the uncompromising urge. |
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