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Lacerated

by Amanda L Marron

You reject my heart
Without a thought for tomorrow
So here I am
Arriving promptly at unrequited once again

05/20/2006

Posted on 05/21/2006
Copyright © 2024 Amanda L Marron

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 05/23/06 at 03:47 AM

So much said with so few words I especially empathize with the last line "Arriving promptly at unrequited once again", as if on que. Concise,clever write. smh

Posted by Jared Fladeland on 07/22/06 at 03:44 PM

Yep. ferocious writer. I knew it. I was like this once, in junior high. in my own case, I was too stupid to understand what no meant. But it was sorta romantic at the time.

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