Posted by Julie Adams on 05/10/06 at 06:20 PM Richard, I am the wind is a great title first of all--love how it arrives at the end, full circle...also loved the fresh uses of imagery and idea, drifting into each other, evolving from stanza to stanza...I think this intricate piece warrants a 2nd and 3rd reading to pull all the strings of this imagist music together, but the intruiging ideas herein lure the eyes to search beyond the surface...well done, Richard...nice to read u again, peace, *jewels* |