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What I Wish I Could Say

by Christel Crews

If you could see past
the impatience
and mistakes
you might find
someone who cares
and wants to see
where this might lead
grasping the feeling
that this could be
Everything
but I will not beg
nor will I bother
I just wish I could explain
that if you ask
I will wait until
the timing is right
But will the timing
ever be right for you
Why won't you let me
into your world
locked up, sealed shut
what else can I do
I hate to say it
but I miss you

04/26/2006

Author's Note: sheer rambling...

Posted on 04/26/2006
Copyright © 2024 Christel Crews

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kristi Paik on 04/26/06 at 11:23 PM

Sheer brillance I would say :)

Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 04/29/06 at 02:52 AM

I have met before everything you just brilliantly wrote…I wish I could "ramble" this emotively & creatively.

Posted by Vere Mantratriad on 05/15/06 at 06:27 PM

Another that mirrors thoughts that I have had on far too many occasions. You've expressed them eloquently. One would not know it to be a rambling without your label.

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