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in the midst of you
by Jim BenzI lost my soul in your vagina
but didn't really mind
it was just one of those things: surreal
like flower petals
in a volcano, pulsating
and when my dreams came up
for air, I didn't mind
that all my passion stayed behind
like a moist explosion, grinning
in the midst of you 04/26/2006 Author's Note: disclaimer: yesterday I was inadventently promted to write a poem using a bunch of words people hated to see or use in poems.
Posted on 04/26/2006
Copyright © 2024 Jim Benz
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Julie Adams on 04/26/06 at 05:40 PM I LOVE THIS JIM, every detail...the breaks impecable...the imagery vivid...subject racey...tile enticing...just SMASHING! KUDOS!
Hey, would you want to share the assignment/words, I'd love to give it a try...
...peace, *jewels* |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 04/28/06 at 02:56 AM I told you! I did not have vex with that verb!
Have you gone plumb stark-raving-naked crazy?
What the heck's wrong with the word flower? |
| Posted by Lauren Singer on 08/16/07 at 03:47 AM haha love the disclaimer, and liked the piece even before i read it. |
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