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Somewhere in Your Oklahoma

by Michael Faraday

Somewhere in your Oklahoma
I see fields of wheat and toils of sweat
arms and legs tanned
inked on images creased
on brow and corners
of well seen days,
your lips grin
with dry-eyed yesterdays.

He's in you, you know
when he would walk and talk
picking brain stones from the furrows
it's you now
the child collecting memories
these days it's hard on the joints
remembering.

You see through green lenses
the Spring Wheat growing,
as it always does
fertile ground not forsaken
living in his eyes and memories
and now yours
more than ever.

04/25/2006

Posted on 04/25/2006
Copyright © 2025 Michael Faraday

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 05/17/06 at 06:36 PM

Somewhere in my Oklahoma this poem paints a picture so familar. I love the imagery of this piece and the nostalgic feel. Nice work.

Posted by Mara Meade on 08/08/06 at 12:19 PM

It's back on my favourites list.

Posted by Mara Meade on 07/05/07 at 01:42 AM

Jus to let you know I am back for a re-read of this. No matter history or time, there are some things that stand true; this poem is one of those for me. I am ever grateful.

Posted by Mara Meade on 02/09/09 at 05:13 AM

Michael, I am back for another read of this. I can't tell you how many times it slips through my mind. Heh. Glad you wrote it!

Posted by Richard Vince on 06/06/10 at 08:51 PM

beautiful and evocative; the sort of poem to love to read and wish i could write. a very deserving POTD. :)

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