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alone
by Peter Humphreysimages
through windows
moving
as if
on screens
from left
to right
as we
sit
solitary
on that
train
rolling
through
valley green
by
mountain yellow
and
waters clear
to
village small
with
churchyard quaint
where you
rest
quiet
and I
bestir
the memory
of that journey
made
those years
before
returning
now
without you
no
with you
not alone
never
alone
with you
with
you
04/24/2006 Posted on 04/24/2006
Copyright © 2024 Peter Humphreys
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 04/25/06 at 02:21 PM Beautiful piece- vivid imagery! message well taken. Excellent write Peter! |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 04/25/06 at 05:59 PM The flow, colours, and details make this poem so successful. The emotions of it grasp at my heart with your universal language. Fav+. |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 04/28/06 at 03:02 PM very well expressed sentiment. Simple words which carry a load of emotion! I enjoyed it! |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 04/28/06 at 03:14 PM This is based on a true event...and so lovely it is written inside the core of us who know. I always love your writing! |
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