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Godot
by Bradd HowardWaiting for a man to come...
to bring me all that I thought I needed from a man.
to prove to me that what I thought I needed
was only really what I thought I wanted
Waiting for a man to cum.
Sometimes the inevitable can last forever
like waiting for the coffee to drip
or for your cigarette to burn out.
the taste of dripping anticipation...
Waiting...
what's to be said for waiting?
My arms feel like they are going to fly off my body.
waiting for them to come back to me
and for my pen to slow down so I can wait to sleep once more
Waiting for a man to cum.
Sometimes the inevitable can be halted
until we are ready to handle it's impact.
and sometimes we have to deal with that man right away...
smile at him and tell him
that he is not what you need. 04/20/2006 Author's Note: a jumble of thoughts but I liked the initial premise and some of the lines... give me suggestions for bettering the material? cut out the first stanza perhaps?
Posted on 04/20/2006
Copyright © 2020 Bradd Howard
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Paul Marino on 04/20/06 at 09:47 PM i actually like the first stanza a little, braddly. and the title, i think. it was rambling, but that's ok. your daddy rambles sometimes. |
| Posted by Karl Waldbauer on 07/26/06 at 07:34 AM I like the first stanza as it sets the tone and mood of the poem quite well. This is fine work Bradd. |
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