|
Oceans run deep
by Aaron Michaelthere's a space between, filled
to overflowing, so when
i wish i knew how you were
all i have to do is feel for turbulance.
and though we're not close,
i'm close enough that you know you
will never drown.
and it is said that oceans divide
yet all it took was
touching the surface,
however small
to create a wave
that seems insignifigant to most,
but to you reads like a novel.
feeling travels further through water.
this unspoken communication proves it.
there is comfort in the ocean between us.
and oceans run deep.
04/13/2006 Author's Note: written with my alien twin, Anne Engelen. AKA the Belgian Waffle.
Posted on 04/13/2006
Copyright © 2024 Aaron Michael
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 04/13/06 at 07:21 PM one thing has to be said about Belgian waffles though THEY ARE SOOOOO YUMMY!!!!!!!!!! |
| Posted by Charles J Hannan on 04/15/06 at 01:29 PM A wonderful poem that says it all. Well written indeed. |
| Posted by Karl Waldbauer on 04/15/06 at 06:58 PM The imagery is subtle yet stunning, Aaron. WaffleWoman sent me to your library and I owe her a big "Thank you". |
| Posted by Julie Adams on 04/18/06 at 08:54 PM this is a great shared poem, congrat to you both on the top 10 list...all the best, jewels |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 04/21/06 at 02:37 PM High Tides through Low Tides - this poem is a symphonic flow of how friendship endures each others flows. A very heart/mind transforming understanding of what truly matters in the heart of all closenesses. Magnificent! Good tidings to both of you! —Jill |
| Posted by Nicole Assenza on 04/22/06 at 05:23 AM This says things I always knew in a different way, and that's very refreshing. |
|
