| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 04/11/06 at 12:16 PM beautiful. So few words that express so much feeling. |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 04/12/06 at 08:19 PM breathtaking! |
| Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 04/13/06 at 09:58 PM a sigh from a distant cloud.
When only dew littered the land ....so quiet and serene. i know this didn't take place anywhere near Santa Monica Blvd! how many of us find value in silence? denial's louder than the steamer at starbucks! i find more than serenity here, I find hope, especially in that last line - I heard you call my name...i don't always pick one, but today you are POTD, my friend! PK |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 04/15/06 at 07:10 PM You just took me to paradise! thank you! |
| Posted by JD Clay on 04/29/06 at 06:26 PM Wow! this has tremendous momentum, Karl. It speaks well beyond the words themselves, from title to forever, inception to infinity.
My first impression was: the whisper that roared.
pe4ce...
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| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 05/06/06 at 03:31 PM Yes, when you walked into the space of time, slowing down the world. The external caused the inner silence when you heard those words. |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 05/07/06 at 08:07 PM Yes, in SILENCE alone can we HEAR the whispers of LIFE. Beautiful. |
