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by Ronald A Pavellas

spring rains fill the pond
as the sun dispels the clouds
a koi leaps skyward

04/09/2006

Posted on 04/09/2006
Copyright © 2025 Ronald A Pavellas

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Timothy Somers on 04/09/06 at 05:56 PM

Form & Imagery, Feng & Shui. I'm glad spring has drawn you out old friend. Thanks for the repast.

Posted by Julie Adams on 04/10/06 at 05:49 PM

I love haiku, and this Sprintime piece is refreshing to read, esp. after I looked up Koi ( I just wasn't sure what it was)...but love the image that last line conjured up...all the best, jewels

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 04/13/06 at 04:03 AM

Hi Ronald. Yes...this is very ku-spring! Nice write.

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