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Cynical
by Christel CrewsYou left me
Cynical
Walled - fortified
No emotion in
Nothing let out
You left me
Trapped
Wounded - alone
No where to run
No one to turn to
You left me
Defeated
Broken - shattered
Afraid of myself
Terrified of everyone else
You left me
Time
Pondering - trying
To break the chains
Expose the pain
And attempt to stand again 03/16/2006 Author's Note: Its been years now, and I'm just realizing how my past has tainted my view on relationships... I'm trying to break this thought pattern
Posted on 03/17/2006
Copyright © 2025 Christel Crews
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Delilah Coyne on 03/18/06 at 01:22 AM This cuts right to the bone. The words you've chosen to convey your feelings are dead-on. Very well done. |
| Posted by Matthew Taylor on 04/01/06 at 05:19 AM I've been ther often, I related deeply. |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 09/24/06 at 05:42 AM Christel, you can't imagine how much these words mean to me, with my history of lousy luck with guys. You said it so much better than I could and I feel the strength in these words, even though the pain is present.
~Chelle~ |
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