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Promises Broken

by Joan Serratelli

I asked you
for your help
you said yes
I was happy
it meant alot to me

But then you
changed your mind
and left me
wondering why
I mean so little
to you

Next time I dare
to ask for anything
just say no
I'm tired of asking
and being let down

I'd rather you
were truthful
from the beginning
I really can take it
what I resent
more than anything
is being made to feel
like I'm begging
you don't know
how much it hurts

03/16/2006

Author's Note: Just another let down...

Posted on 03/16/2006
Copyright © 2024 Joan Serratelli

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Brian Francis on 03/17/06 at 04:24 AM

Oh how true. This piece speaks to a feeling we have all experienced. You have done a wonderful job! --bf

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