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Achew! Haiku III

by Soulo Jacob Bourgeau

Sniffle bug sings me
Catchy fever melodies
Called lung butter blues

03/05/2006

Author's Note: Or should L3 be: "Called lung butter blues"...? I was hesitant to cross the line 'twixt humour and disgusting visuals. Any votes for the more gross L3? Or is my blatant twisting of this esteemed ancient form gross enough? ** "cookie" changed to "butter" per Tate's recommendation. Gross alliteration trumps good taste. **

Posted on 03/06/2006
Copyright © 2024 Soulo Jacob Bourgeau

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Christel Crews on 02/22/07 at 03:11 PM

well, these have me laughing and crying because who hasn' been there? my sister is sick right now and she could be your visual aid for these!

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