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eventide
by Peter Humphreysdark
vaulted
pew
haltered
candlelit
cloister
low
words spoken
vows broken
winter winds
do blow
you caught me
I sought thee
candle lights
do glow
tenderly
starkly
blue
eyes sparkling
lights darkening
eventide
aglow
I held
thee
you kissed
me
deeply
deeply
slow
03/04/2006 Author's Note: http://s9.quicksharing.com/v/1524397/eventide.mp3.html
Posted on 03/04/2006
Copyright © 2024 Peter Humphreys
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 03/04/06 at 11:07 PM Amazing how, when even the shadows deepen, we find light in unexpected places... even places where not long before we would have never dremt of going.
I especially like the "spirituality", the depth and dimension of this; the idea of cathedral halls, chandeliers with candles, pews, and the feeling of quiet (cloister). It speaks more to the soul than to the mind. |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 03/04/06 at 11:27 PM A certain peace, and passion wait at close of day, a time that love thrives on. Lovely flowing poem, Peter, my friend. |
| Posted by Jane E Pearce on 03/05/06 at 04:29 PM Exquisite. Lovely to read. Jane |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 03/12/06 at 06:45 AM Peter, I have amethyst tears misting my eyes because this is so tender and romantically beautiful.
~Chelle~ |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 04/19/06 at 03:12 PM Beatifully romantic and a wondrful read. A wonderful youching piece! |
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