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Within Without

by Julie Adams

A marksman
wanders
like the poor
through wasteland
observing moral law
beneath twinkling skies
seeing beyond
Kant,
himself,
their awes,
into the eye
of man—kind,
a triumph
not without heart,
feeling
reaching
beyond self
beyond dividing walls
to where wonders come in
threes,
and even those without
have dreams
pumping
within

02/14/2006

Author's Note: VERY ROUGH AS YET! Inspired by: The Third Wonder, by Edwin Markham , which reads as follows-- 'Two things,' said Kant, 'fill me with breathless awe/ The starry heavens and the moral law.'/ I know a thing more aweful and obscure--/ The long, long patience of the plundered poor.

Posted on 02/14/2006
Copyright © 2024 Julie Adams

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jim Benz on 02/16/06 at 01:13 AM

rough but vital. this is a lovely, meaningful poem and I like the quote that inspired it. going directly to Kant can be interesting too. I've done that more than once. now, where's the tanka I was looking for?

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