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Peel Me, Morning

by Julie Adams


the early sun
peels my face
in layers
of dawn
awoken
thankful
with poems
on my palette

02/10/2006

Posted on 02/10/2006
Copyright © 2024 Julie Adams

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 02/11/06 at 03:01 PM

This - I can see!

Posted by Michael Faraday on 04/03/06 at 06:52 PM

succinctly said! :)

Posted by JD Clay on 03/03/11 at 04:31 AM

What I like most about this delightful piece is the subtle simplicity in which it unfolds. It has all the ingredients of a perfect day and even better poem. Great stuff, jewels

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