Peel Me, Morning by Julie Adams
the early sun
peels my face
in layers
of dawn
awoken
thankful
with poems
on my palette
02/10/2006 Posted on 02/10/2006 Copyright © 2024 Julie Adams
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 02/11/06 at 03:01 PM This - I can see! |
Posted by Michael Faraday on 04/03/06 at 06:52 PM succinctly said! :) |
Posted by JD Clay on 03/03/11 at 04:31 AM What I like most about this delightful piece is the subtle simplicity in which it unfolds. It has all the ingredients of a perfect day and even better poem. Great stuff, jewels |
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