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by Ava Blu




I stood with the sun setting
across my bare back,

thinking (believing)
you’d never leave.

02/05/2006

Posted on 02/05/2006
Copyright © 2025 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Soulo Jacob Bourgeau on 02/08/06 at 12:51 AM

As if denying that he's really gone, sunset across your bare back. Love that.

Posted by Robin Patterson on 02/08/06 at 03:18 AM

Jeanna- can't help but wonder how long you stood there trying to feel the passing warmth? Letting the large orb disappear as you stood naked and vulnerable at it's decent--very nice. Robin

Posted by Melanie J Yarbrough on 02/09/06 at 02:10 PM

sometimes there's such a thin line between the two-- thinking and believing. and that's what either kills us or makes us stronger.

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