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Ronnie has radars

by Rebecca Lin

Not allowed unless you're 17.
So ride that yellow bus
until your head falls off
and you're falling asleep
in the abyss-
absolute joining of the free.

I had this dream
that you were mine
and that love was open.
I thought it was okay to feel
the way I did,
but I choked on my words
and you twisted your spine.

I screamed a lot
on the phone.
Guess I didn't know
how to keep my own.
People keep telling me
that they don't mind,
but we think there's something
I need to find.

01/28/2006

Author's Note: I was listening to The Beatles' Come Together when I wrote this o_o

Posted on 01/29/2006
Copyright © 2024 Rebecca Lin

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Max Phineas on 01/29/06 at 04:57 PM

Wow that's really good. And weird because I was going to comment that it sounded like a Beatles song and then I read your Author's note!!!

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