Forever came yesterday Slipped between my fingers And disappeared. Time ended this morning Though the ticking lingers in my ear. Tomorrow stopped trying And today is lying. Because the Sun persists on rising. But we know In the depths of our beings That time has stopped.
01/27/2006
Very well done, Cole. You had me from beginning to finish. I especially liked the second stanza.
Seems we take no note of time, but from its loss. I guess in the end, time remains...and we go. This is really excellent work, Cole.
I love how this one flows... beautiful!
