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Crack Down
by Charles E MinshallThere's a place in our sidewalk
That has an awful crack,
Things that fall in there
Never do come back.
China might be deep down there
A place where they have tongs,
I was listening at the crack
And I think I heard some gongs.
Tomorrow I'll fill that crack
I've really had enough,
I'll fill it to the top
I'm tired of losing stuff.
01/26/2006 Posted on 01/26/2006
Copyright © 2025 Charles E Minshall
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 01/26/06 at 08:22 PM ...charlie, this H E A V Y !!! really like the waltz thru humaness, and humane-ness...good work, as always...peace, chaz |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 01/27/06 at 06:58 PM Oh yeah, I'm tired of losing stuff, too. So cleverly put... |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 01/29/06 at 03:44 AM oh please, though...before you fill that crack - will you tape record the gongs? Like Lori, I like the idea of them too! delightfully fun! él jill |
| Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 01/30/06 at 05:34 PM Love it, great story telling |
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