pathetic.org :: to these ears. by Melanie J Yarbrough

to these ears.

I'd never heard you
acknowledge your heart
before tonight
and the stinging of the name danielle
has ruined it
you
me

for me.

01/24/2006

Posted on 01/24/2006
Copyright © 2024 Melanie J Yarbrough

Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by Ava Blu on 01/25/06 at 05:18 PM

I really like the conecpt of this and how much substance you have with so few words.

Posted by Paul Marino on 01/28/06 at 03:16 PM

ah. some of your lines i like a lot. "i've never heard you acknowledge your heart". mhmm

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 01/29/06 at 04:52 AM

This is like a "pause"...midthought, captured in a poem. Nice, again!

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