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Throw Down, Sucka

by Matthew Zangen

Poppy seed banana peels
rolled across the floor.
Black microbe marble game
All in: begin Round Four.

11/15/2005

Author's Note: So it's the same rhythm/concept as I was Hungry, but I wanted to see if I could make something else out of the same rhythm. Maybe If I shake it enough it will become a real poem.

Posted on 01/23/2006
Copyright © 2024 Matthew Zangen

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Vere Mantratriad on 01/26/06 at 04:27 AM

I can see something in this... I think you do have to shake it, but for some reason this made sense to me and it worked. I think you should keep on with these exercises, there seems to be something to it.

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