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I am Michele's Piece of Soot
by Michele SchottelkorbI testify on your nonchalant behalf
when you smile, your eyes give you away
and I seem
to waste precious moments
trying to figure out my motive for caring
there are those who say
a person cannot change
unless they want to
when you forever put yourself before others
the world slowly fades to gray
I am charcoal.
01/16/2006 Author's Note: the title is in the spirit of "Fight Club"... this is the first poem i have written in a very long time...
Posted on 01/16/2006
Copyright © 2024 Michele Schottelkorb
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Soulo Jacob Bourgeau on 01/16/06 at 11:10 PM I am Jack's complete understanding of the meaning here. Nice job, Michele |
| Posted by Krystall Vega on 01/17/06 at 04:51 PM I definitely clicked on this because of the Fight Club reference :) And this reminds me of my style in a way. I enjoyed this. |
| Posted by Dana E Brossard on 01/17/06 at 05:52 PM I am excited to read a new piece of yours. Fading to charcoal through caring for others is an interesting thought. =) |
| Posted by Susan Q Tomas on 01/19/06 at 04:13 AM This poem speaks some truth to it. |
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