That word is whispering by Keith D Allison Of our dream I can’t scrape the eyes free Lacerations share consume me in the depths of sea Deep into the mystery of pearls glittering as diamonds Trembling as the quake burns deep within The light almost wholly surrounds me I live to the promise To your caress, brushing the lips that I might breathe Rewrite 1/11/06 First two lines of 1/06/06 I can't abrade my eyes free of this castle in the sky Lacerations consume me in the depths of sea 01/06/2006 Posted on 01/07/2006 Copyright © 2024 Keith D Allison Member Comments on this Poem Posted by Maureen Glaude on 01/09/06 at 01:13 AM there's a strength and compelling nature to this poem that for me really comes in in the second line. I think one or two word choices might be varied for experiement, and just simplicity, but a lovely romantic piece that stays centered in and fits its setting beautifully. Lines 3-5 are my favourite. Posted by Tom Goss on 01/11/06 at 07:27 PM shimmering with emotion, nice Return to the Previous Page   pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online All works Copyright © 2024 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)