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D i s s o l v e

by Ava Blu

the frost between your teeth
have taught me how to gaze past lying tongues,

but I still have the remnants on my neck
proving you were once thawed

call me up
and whisper through the lines


you really think anyone
would listen this time?

tell them all how salt only adds to our flame
but we've been drowning,
and I know the chemistry behind your schemes


so you can take the myths
to keep your feet grounded

while I scrape every memory
away from my face.



01/04/2006

Posted on 01/05/2006
Copyright © 2025 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Anita Mac on 01/05/06 at 04:28 PM

This is really well done. Everything from the words to the format. Good stuff... The feel of it reminds me of an Ani DiFranco song. Love it.

Posted by Joseff Marat on 01/14/06 at 06:32 PM

Hey hey heheheheyyyy.... NICE! Whatever you may have lost at one time, you've definately achieved regaining it. Brilliant and clever!

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