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"Abandoned"

by Max Phineas

Why aren't you seeing this?
Don't you believe me?
You're supposed to-
Said you always would.

Now, it's over?
Over this?
It's a fucking waste
and I hate you.

And I love you so much I could kill you.
We just needed to talk
And you weren't there for me.
You weren't there!

Now what?
It's your move
And the stakes are at breaking point.

01/02/2006

Author's Note: More just a string of emotions that came out. I expect no acclaim for it, don't worry.

Posted on 01/02/2006
Copyright © 2024 Max Phineas

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Rebecca Lin on 01/02/06 at 09:50 PM

I feel the same way.

Posted by Katerina T Nix on 12/02/06 at 12:36 PM

I am very impressed with this piece. Some nice raw emotion here. Well done! =Kat :)

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